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Thursday, July 14, 2011 @ 09:07 PM
posted by Barbsawyers

Just as gray is the new black for fashionistas, so storytelling has become the new social media for corporate communicators. Book after book, from The Tipping Point to Made to Stick, insist that we tell stories. Microsoft has even created a new position senior director of storytelling.

Whoa!

As someone who has been telling corporate stories for many years, let me interrupt with an emergency news flash.  Yes, storytelling is the best way to capture attention, hearts and memories and make your point. But it’s much more difficult than other forms of nonfiction writing.

create magical corporate momentsJust like in a story, though, the higher the mountain, the more rewarding the quest.

After I watched the presentation of friend Donna Papacosta  from the IABC world conference, I realized it was time to share what I’ve learned as a creator of corporate story moments. I know I should tell a story here, but it’s difficult to have a story-generating conflict with someone as nice and smart as Donna.

Until it became trendy, I did not consider myself a storyteller. If I were, I would have written hit novels and screen plays. I have tried, but I just can’t sustain the long and loopy story arcs.

Short vignettes

Lucky for me, corporate storytellers don’t have 300 pages or two hours to spin the yarn.  We have a few sentences, pages at the most, or a few seconds, minutes at best.

So although I have learned a lot about the craft from screen writers and novelists, especially Stephen King’s On Writing, I have spent more time reflecting on the short stories told in television commercials.  Or at least that’s how I justify hours flopped out on the couch when my eyes and brain are too tired to read or write anymore.

The main difference between television commercials and corporate storytelling is truth. Commercials are about fictional characters who we can relate to because they are just like us or the people we want to see ourselves as.  But the characters in corporate stories can’t be idealized. They have to be real.

Short, real stories can be employed in many ways, from anecdotes that introduce your presentation to detailed case studies to quick examples.

Heroes we love

My favorite is the regular-employee-as-hero tale. These almost always involve our hero coming through for customers and co-workers despite a Herculean challenge:  the ravages of the tornado, tsunami, ice storm or other natural disaster… the bombing of the twin towers or other violent event…  the project with the impossible deadline…  the new mission-critical system  that doesn’t work… the evil competitor stealing clients… the heartless bureaucrats destroying dreams … I could go on, but you get it.

That magic comes not only from recognizing typical employees as heroes, but also from showing examples of the behaviour the organization would love other people to emulate.

Notice that these story lines are all based on conflict and resolution. You cannot have a story without conflict. The more insurmountable the challenge seems, with setbacks thrown in to build tension, the more dramatic the story will be. The more dramatic the story, the more likely are people to pay attention, remember and think about how the narrative applies to them.

Conflict is vital

Unfortunately, some corporate folk like to pretend they don’t have problems. This makes it impossible to tell a story. Air brushing the facts also undermines their credibility.

Fortunately, you can often find inhuman forces that will spark  the conflict, as in the natural disasters and violent events I just mentioned.

Better still, finger an outsider bad guy, as in the evil competitor or the heartless bureaucrat. The us-against-them mentality will kick the chronicle and unite your audience against the common enemy.

Hi-def emotions

The better you develop the character of your villains and heroes, the better your story will be.  Your audience has to care about the hero. If Val had to first make sure the home generator was powering her dad’s dialysis machine before rushing into work, we love her all the more. If Tony sacrificed fantasy sports camp to meet the deadline, our applause will ring louder.

But sometimes the conflict has to come from within, as with the flawed system your IT department developed or bought.

To deal with that, you can admit that life is messy and we learn best through our mistakes. Or you can imply that the conflict came from a situation and not an individual. Spend as little time as possible blaming and move on. This does, however, water down the drama.

Of course, anyone who works in corporate communication knows how compromises get you through the approval process. Write a Cadillac, but settle for a Volvo.  The good news is that compelling stories can often grip micro-managing approvers so tightly that they’ll interfere much less than usual.

Character slices

Because corporate stories are short, you don’t have much time to build character. So select only the most telling details. And remember the advice of my grade 9 English teacher: develop the character of your heroes and villains through what they say, what they do and what other people say about them.

Although you want to keep your corporate stories real, you can ignore or photoshop details that would bog down the story or embarrass your heroes. For example, I will often tighten dialogue or clean up glaring grammar mistakes, especially with people whose first laguage is not English. If I’m telling the story in print, I don’t need to mention that my hero has a wandering left eye or strange taste in jewellery.

Your story

Similarly, if you’re telling your own story, you don’t have to blow your life wide open, just reveal a few details that make your audience say, as they do so well in the television commercials, “He’s just like me.”

Don’t toot your own horn. It’s fine to write an effusive introduction that someone else will recite, but when you’re talking or writing a personal anecdote, be humble, even self-deprecating, if you want to be loved.

I read one blogger who tells too-perfect personal stories to introduce her advice-filled posts. However, I would take her more seriously if she occasionally mentioned bingeing on cookies or yelling at her husband.

Because posts are often more personal than corporate storytelling, it’s not surprising that some of the most moving storytellers live in the blogosphere. Naomi Dunford, who combines tales of personal tragedy and triumph with smart internet marketing advice, is one of my favorites.

Common ground

Naomi cuts to the visceral feelings level that everyone shares. In one post, she told the story of being broke with a sick baby on the way, then suddenly achieving internet success. I remember the post because I can relate to worries about money and loved ones and stubborn optimism.

This need to communicate from a common ground is why leaders should avoid mentioning luxury vacations and talk more about precious moments with their children or lessons from working construction in college.  And don’t forget that you can decide on that common ground only by clearly understanding who you are telling your story to.

Although classic storytelling advice may go on about the importance of setting, remember that corporate stories are short. If you want people to read your account, you need to grab them by opening with the conflict, then circling back, but only to the scene, context or back story bits that are absolutely vital. As with character development, select only very specific and colorful details that will best paint the picture or make your point.

Get to the point

Ever since Aesop’s fables, around 600 BC, there’s been a moral to the stories we tell. Corporate stories have to have a point too.

Most corporate storytellers clearly state their point, in the introduction and the conclusion.

Remember that if the point doesn’t quickly become obvious, your readers will feel like you do when you’re listening to a wind bag talk about her weekend, while drumming you fingers and saying to yourself: “Get to the point!”

To sum up, here’s what corporate storytellers need to remember

  • Be concise
  • Keep it real
  • Base your stories on conflict and resolution
  • Drive the conflict with heroes and villains
  • Develop your characters by selecting specific, colorful, telling details
  • Clearly state the point of your story
  • Appeal to emotions your audience can relate to
  • Relate to your audience from a common ground

Learn from the masters

Although much of my advice has focused on the constraints of corporate storytelling, please don’t limit yourself. You’ll find the best storytellers in books, movies, television and advertising.

Learn the techniques from the epic masters. Then distil them into magical corporate story moments.

Friday, June 3, 2011 @ 03:06 PM
posted by Barbsawyers

Lately I keep hearing how we need to turn communication into a fun game.

At the Mesh11 conference,Gabe Zichermann talked about how marketing is becoming “gamified,” with badges, rescue missions and other techniques adapted from video games. As Gabe said, “The future is fun.”

This week the New York Times featured an article about how Groupon is using fun writing in its email marketing to become this year’s online success darling.

girls just wanna have funSure, most workplaces encourage fun on  special occasions. But usually there’s a thick black marker line between work and fun. Even in pro-fun offices, you hear: “We work hard. We play hard.”

But maybe that line is fading. Hooray!

The anti-fun campaign began in grade school when the teachers told us to stop horsing around. Yet the teachers I remember, and learned the most from, knew how to make learning fun.

At work, I’ve often gotten into trouble for having too much fun: for laughing too loudly, for not taking this week’s flavor seriously enough.

Yet, because I enjoy what I do, work is usually fun. What’s more, I frequently build in fun for others. For example, with the software engineer I’m about to interview, I’ll probably chat briefly, maybe say something funny, to put him at ease before I start asking questions.

I don’t know how I would have survived the treacherous passages in my life had I not been able to laugh. Even when I’m too grim to see the humour in my predicament, I can always find a funny TV show or other fun diversion to lift my spirits.

Like a game, I also give myself rewards when I complete a task, especially the ones I loathe. For example, when I finished my tax preparation, I let myself buy red jeans.  Now I smile every time I put them on.

I love how blogging has allowed me to tap into my fun side. I would never have written about the relationship between laughter and peeing in the corporate world. But maybe I should have gone for more amusing anecdotes or wry comments, my personal brand of humour, though nothing sarcastic or mean.

In my writing training, I advise people how to use humour in workplace communication. Don’t you always remember the presenter who started with a good joke? Don’t you want to do business, and pleasure, with fun people?

I’m going to further explore this notion of gamification, which I had earlier written off because of my total lack of interest in video games and such. I see how mesmerized my teens get.  I’ve always enjoyed board and card games. And, despite the best efforts of teachers and bosses, I never stopped  wanting to have fun.

As Cyndi Lauper sang: “Girls just wanna have fun.”

Lucky for me,  fun is becoming serious business.

Thursday, March 17, 2011 @ 04:03 PM
posted by Barbsawyers

If you want to intimately connect with people through written words, you need to start with insight into exactly who you are writing for.

To go straight for hearts and minds, avoiding the objective detachment of segments and stakeholders, think of someone you know who is typical of this group or make up a fantasy person. Then ask yourself:

What gets her up in the morning?

What keeps him up at night?

do writing worries keep you up?Sure, there are lots more questions you can ask. But if you can figure out the answers to these two, you can get inside the head of this person and like-minded people.

I’ve been pondering these questions as I prepare my talk for the Toronto chapter of the International Association of Business Communicators. Because I’m a communicator and friends with many others, the answers come easily.

Still, I don’t want to miss anything. So I’ve started a discussion on our Linkedin group. I’d love to gain some insight here too.

Here are some of my answers.

As a communicator, what gets me up in the morning?

The thrill of being part of the action. I first felt this one day when I was lugging news releases to the press gallery of our provincial legislature.  I still feel that rush when I’m asked for my opinion from  big players in business, nonprofits or anywhere that counts.

The satisfaction of helping people. I’ve always felt good about writing things that help people make sense of the world. When I write about an IT project, for example, I know the information is reducing the stress of the employees who will be affected.

Being creative. Working with words, strategizing, coming up with ideas, matching them with images, media. Imagining, risking, testing, refining. I love it.

As a communicator, what keeps me up at night?

Worrying that I won’t get everything done. That it won’t be good enough. That I’ll make a serious mistake. Like those nightmares when I’m writing an exam on a subject I know nothing about. Or I’m presenting in my underwear.

Difficult people. The nasty one who sneaks a dagger into the meeting room. The stupid ones who insist they’re right. Fortunately, these people are way outnumbered by the terrific ones.

Feeling behind the times because I don’t have an iPhone, don’t know how to use Photostop and am not obsessed with Twitter.

Worrying that my book and workshops will fail, that I’ve wasted my time when I should have been hustling potential clients for so-so work.

But enough about me. I’ve shown you mine. Now you show me yours.

What gets you up in the morning?

What keeps you up at night?

Thursday, October 28, 2010 @ 03:10 PM
posted by Barbsawyers

Tell a story. That’s the advice we are always receiving about our work writing.

But before you create that epic tale, step back and think about how you often dread hearing stories from that long-winded boss, aging aunt or chatter box friend. That’s usually because they go on for too long, don’t seem to have a point or involve people you don’t give a fig about.

write stories that don't produce yawnsIf rattling on like this is annoying in conversation, just think of how yawn-inducing it is with the written word.

Unless you are a gifted storyteller, you need to keep your anecdotes short. You need to have a clearly identifiable point. And you need to tell them about people your readers can relate to or care about.

Let me stress that I love the show-me power of stories. Well done, they touch people emotionally, encourage them to draw conclusions, humanize the writer, entertain, reinforce points, build credibility–-and much more. However, when they are poorly done, eyes glaze over, minds travel and fingers hit keys to leave your site.

I admit that I’m no Shaherazad, which explains why I’m not a rich novelist or screen writer. Chances are neither are you.

But I am adept with a quick anecdote or passing references to friends, family and interests. I enjoy letting readers get to know me a little better by telling quick stories about my personal experiences. For clients, I often rely on vignettes that show employee enthusiasm or happy customers.

Six tips

From this experience, here’s what I’ve figured out:

1. Keep your story very short.

2. Choose your details carefully. You are not painting a picture, but zooming in on the bits that illustrate your point in a vivid and compelling way.

3. Don’t describe the setting or back story. If it’s vital, show it through an action or a revealing detail.

4. State the clear moral or point of your story. Don’t assume your readers will get it.

5. Know your limitations. If you feel that the eyes may be wandering, or worse still, rolling, shorten the story.

6. Make quick references to personal experiences to weave elements of story telling into more of your writing.

Remember that few people are great spoken story tellers. Even fewer excel at writing stories.

But if you follow these tips, you can keep eyes and minds open and riveted on you.

These tips demonstrate why you need to refer back to what works in conversation when you write. And why you need to read my book, Write like you talk–only better..

They also remind me of a story…

Photo credit: Joshunter on Flickr.

Friday, June 11, 2010 @ 01:06 AM
posted by Barbsawyers

Our junior Mother Theresa

Around Toronto, we’ve known about Craig Kielberger since he traveled to Asia in his early teens to raise awareness about the deplorable conditions of carpet weavers and other child laborers.

On top of moving people to open their wallets and hearts, he clearly explained how giving, fundraising and volunteering can raise employee engagement, a big theme at the conference, and serve the bottom line.

Inspiring and practical, my favorite speaker combination.

Why Gen Y?

What interested me most about the KPMG session on demographics and engagement was the insight into Gen Yers, the people born after 1980 that accounting firms like KPMG are so actively courting.

Even more revealing were the comments that followed on the difficulty of working with the Gen Yers who think  they are entitled to quick promotions, much as they received trophies just for playing on a sports team.

Social media no excuse for bad quality

For the next session, I actually started somewhere else, but quickly realized I wasn’t going to learn anything new, so I trekked through the hotel labyrinth  to hear Donna Papacosta, multimedia maven.

Donna, Diana and Sue at the IABC world conference 2010Disclosure: Donna is a friend and colleague who sometimes comments on my blog, so I can’t saying anything to piss her off.  That’s her on the left, with Diana Robinson and Sue Horner, fellow members of our Toronto group called Professional Independent Communicators.

Donna provided a lot of very practical advice that unschooled people with flip cams and other recording devices needed to hear.

She showed how easy it is to raise the quality, by using tools such as light meters for video and the levelator to even out different volume levels.  She stressed how important editing is too.

I know it’s not Hollywood, but there’s no excuse to post conference that starts off with a couple minutes of empty chairs.

Don’t be afraid if my arms are up high and I’m staring

It’s natural for me to talk with my hands and look people in the eye. I’ve loved performing since my first ballet recital at age four. But, thanks to Jim Endicott, I will be able to start taking this to a new level. My arms anyways.

He showed us how to use gestures more dramatically than I’m used to and how to coordinate eye contact and movement to connect with the audience. Beware.

All-star finish

This was the first time I’d heard Shel Holtz live, though I’ve been reading him for years.  I’d enjoyed his well-reasoned and researched arguments against the many companies that block employee access to social media.

What was interesting, though, was watching the people who raised their hands when he asked who worked for companies that are blocking social media. As Shel took aim at all the usual suspects, like productivity and security, I could see them nodding in agreement. Many were opening their minds. All it takes is a crack for the light to pour in.

Innovation and communication

Let me start to declaring that I thoroughly enjoyed Guy Kawaski, the Alltopcom founder and venture capitalist. He seems to be the keynoter at every big conference I hear about lately.

Because he was in Canada he knew enough to talk fondly about hockey and healthcare. But some of his advice applied more to executives and entrepreneurs than communicators.

So I’m going to skip some of the 11 pieces of advice he provided because they don’t apply. Actually, some of it was contradictory, such as his advice to use only 10 slides in a presentation, which he way exceeded. Maybe he was deliberately demonstrating the ironies of innovation.

Guy’s advice to communicators:

1. Make meaning (not money)

2. Have a mantra (not a rambling mission statement)

3. Jump to the next curve (as in icebox to fridge)

4. Roll the dice.

5. Niche

6. Don’t let the bozos grind you down.

That was my personal favorite. Just wish he’d explained how to tell the bozos from the clowns.